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Being human,
we all make mistakes,
some more than others,
faith begins to break,
the ones you trusted most,
just bring you more pain,
cruel and unfeeling,
life will never be the same,

the unending cycle,
starting from a stab,
leaves a wound bleeding,
scars unnoticed,
unsaid
Thought of this in math, I was bored lol but its easier to write sad poems than happy ones, or at least for me, and sorry for not having a name for the poem, I couldn't think of any >_< but if you really want a title give me one lol
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sadsadbrokenheart Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
ain't that the truth i've had many scars some real other emotionality
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FlAcAsIsTeR Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
awesome! it reminds me of myself, nice job
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Umeko13 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
thank you! =]
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FlAcAsIsTeR Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009
ur welcome
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Rebel-sheep-say-moo5 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2008
very cool i lve the emotion :)
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elasticus Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2008
simple but very true :)
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azn-chik04 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2008
i LOVE your poem.
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Umeko13 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
thank you ^^
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pixiegoth390 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2007
i like this im having some days like that
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KanashiGD Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2005  Student General Artist
no your not I like this one too x3
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