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Unspoken
Its not needed

What is not felt
Is not understood

No one is 'me'
So no one will know
What even I cannot fully

This weight
Beating down
So oppressively
How it frees

Separates me from the world
Yet I'm bound
How unforgiving
A reality
I immediately felt inspired to write after I saw this picture while browsing dA, [link]

I tried my best to express what it may be like to be blind, but its so overwhelming. >< theres so much to say but its easy to fall back onto the predictable; what you would miss or notice at first. I'm glad I was able to reign in most of it.

I didn't try and rhyme or have structure in this one; probably my most random to date. ^^
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chewyraezen Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
random it is but well written. i like poetry that doesn't have a form and is just inspired by the poet.
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Umeko13 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks so much! :D
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